Wattpad - share your own stories

Wattpad is a place where you can share your own fiction writing in a blog-like format as well as read and comment on other people's works. No one needs to know who you are and you'll have readers who may leave encouraging comments on your message board.
Wattpad is a a great way to share your stories and to discover new ones.
One of my brilliant students told me about this wonderful digital tool, and he wrote this about it:

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Stian.

Here is one of his stories: Outcast

Enjoy reading it :-)

New English spelling reform

The European Commission has just announced an agreement whereby English will be the official language of the European Union rather than German, which was the other possibility.

As part of the negotiations, the British Government conceded that English spelling had some room for improvement and has accepted a 5- year phase-in plan that would become known as 'Euro-English'.

In the first year, 's' will replace the soft 'c'.

Sertainly, this will make the sivil servants jump with joy.

The hard 'c' will be dropped in favour of 'k'.

This should klear up konfusion, and keyboards kan have one less letter.

There will be growing publik enthusiasm in the sekond year when the troublesome 'ph' will be replaced with 'f'. This will make words like fotograf 20% shorter.

In the 3rd year, publik akseptanse of the new spelling kan be expekted to reach the stage where more komplikated changes are possible.

Governments will enkourage the removal of double letters which have always ben a deterent to akurate speling.

Also, al wil agre that the horibl mes of the silent 'e' in the languag is disgrasful and it should go away.

By the 4th yer people wil be reseptiv to steps such as replasing 'th' with 'z' and 'w' with 'v'.

During ze fifz yer, ze unesesary 'o' kan be dropd from vords kontaining 'ou' and after ziz fifz yer, ve vil hav a reil sensibl riten styl.

Zer vil be no mor trubl or difikultis and evrivun vil find it ezi TU understand ech oza. Ze drem of a united urop vil finali kum tru.

Und efter ze fifz yer, ve vil al be speking German like zey vunted in ze forst plas.

Task: correct the mistakes in this text.

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Film review or film analysis?

This might help you:

Review	Analysis
Subjective evaluation	Aid to understanding
Introduce and identify      Title, director, genre, producer, studio, (country), year, running time, actors/cast, rating. The reviewer often situates the film with reference to other work by the same director / main actors, and other films in the same genre.	Simple identification is enough (Title, year, director). Other elements mentioned as necessary
Analyse/sum up the plot	Assume that the reader has a working knowledge of the plot – no summary is necessary unless the plot is your focus.
Discuss the genre Evaluate the acting Broader context	Chooses one or several elements and analyses how they work and contribute to the film (setting, narrative, theme, characterization etc.).

This document shows an introductory paragraphs for a film review and a film analysis for 3 different films. 
Read it and try to write your own introductory paragraph for a review and an analysis of a movie you have seen.

Improve your writing

Have a look at my Wiki
Do you want to focus on grammar? have a look here.
(more to come............)